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Like the focus point is just near Toothless' wings, I think the word I'm looking for is bokeh 
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but thanks for the tip! C:
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Here's the Earth.
And damn, it's a pretty sweet rendering.
Honostly I am much more lost in the deatil of the scenery than the subject matter and you can take that whatever way you want it, good bad, neutral...
I think the clouds do it for me, those look real, like I can jump into the sky and it is still a sky, not a work of art.
The water reminds me of big lolling waves, and I love that it's not stark blue or monochromatic blues but I see brownish reds and grays melded into it.
As for Hiccup and Toothless, we really don't get much of them but I really do like the decision you made to hella blur the tail wing - it gives movement and depth of field. The shading on the black is divine,much better than I could do without taking a gagillion hours to figure out my light source.
The proportions are well too; Nothing is questionable - this looks like a movie still.
If you want a nitpick [it really is, so small detail] but I would erase that piece of flying hair on Hiccup down just a bit, it looks a little long and like a mistake brush stroke. Just to be clear, not the top part of his hair but that one longer strand, just take a bit off that and you're golden.
I think for a 'speed paint' this is fantastic. I put it in the
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